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Branding I did for fun
#2
Posted 02 May 2008 - 02:53 AM
Here is a branding Identity that I created for a golf museum in my area; just for fun and practice. I'm new to making logos, so I need some criticism because I would like to improve. Thank You !
So is that the shape of the museum? I like the logo. I'm just not understanding that outside shape.
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#3
Posted 02 May 2008 - 05:14 AM
Yes it is from the shape of the museum. I traced it from this picture.
http://www.awardplan...ath_-_12_02.jpg
How do you think I could improve on the outside shape of the design, so that others will know it is a silhouette of the actual building ?
#4
Posted 02 May 2008 - 07:48 AM
Maybe you should separate the text from the shape/logo part and perhaps make it a little more detailed so there's no question that its a house with a golfball in front.
Made a very very rough sketch of my idea...
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Please don't take this tooo serious, just my thought... good luck and keep up the good work!
/ Tomas
#5
Posted 03 May 2008 - 01:05 AM
Play around the typeface's size, or use of diff font. Another option is making the museum symbol as part of the main text. (customize the letter M perhaps?)
But I think the facade of the bldg is (4 columns) a good element to ad.
Good luck
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#6
Posted 03 May 2008 - 04:08 AM
--- tomas.brolen, I agree. The text is very hard to interpret, being that it is inside of the shape. Your sketch seems to be the more appropriate route to achieving text readability. I will give it a try.
--- baiskee, I like your suggestion of making the building apart of the word MUSEUM as the letter M. I will attempt to customize the first M with this in mind. Also, I'll take a look at some different fonts and sizes. Right now, I'm using Arial bold.
Thanks for your Advice thus far !!
#14
Posted 15 May 2008 - 06:06 PM
If that's so I think the golf ball could be taken out or moved and more detail could be added to the actual museum.
#15
Posted 25 May 2008 - 10:01 AM
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